Could you tell me how my story is?

Sorry, this sounds like it was written in something other than English, and then translated. It is impossible to read with any understanding. I can tell it was not originally written in English, as even a third grader would not write a sentence like: "However this time a strange energy was filled in this room followed by words from the blue hued robot." This probably made sense in Chinese, or Korean, or whatever, and that is where it should have remained.